Wednesday, November 30, 2011

The kid that did a dunk

Once their was a little boy that loved basketball his name was mark and once wanted to play with the 8 grade and he was only in 7 grade and all the time he asked them if he can play and they always said no. and one day he was going home and found a pair of shoes and inside it said MJ and wonder who's are these. then saw the kid playing then he tuck his shoes off and put the other shoes then he went out side . and started shouting baskets and next he was trying to do a ly up and jumped up so high he did a dunk then he can play with the 8graders.

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  1. I like the way you but your sentences but you might want to work on capadlation. I feel this way because need some space when you start a slentence.

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