Wednesday, November 9, 2011
The cherry vs apple
Once there was a cherry who wanted to make a team so he got two people and he got in his car and they went to the apple hood. Next they saw four apples and they took out there ak47 and the apples took out there desert eagle . and so they had a gun war and one cherry was alive and one apple was on the tree and shout the cherry and the apple heard the orange were taking over and want a war with the apple . So they found out that they were in deep trouble .
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This story was funny and fruity! We need to check our verb tense (past but the verbs are in the present). DO not start sentences with "and."
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